You would like to participate in a work related seminar in another country.
Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodations and cost.
Begin the letter with Dear Sir/Madam,
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing to ask for information about the upcoming annual seminar related to the Certified Management Accountants union that will be held in Dubai next month.
I would like that the person in charge of the event could provide me with answer on my below quires. First, I need to know the exact time related to the initiation of the seminar, as this will aid in the process of purchasing the airline tickets. Second, I would be grateful if I could have a copy of the programs’ schedule offered during this event. Third, is the organizing party offer any type of accommodations for foreigner guests, or should the hotel booking process be made by our side. Finally, I need a full disclosure of the attendance cost and any related charges.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Peter
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng from you. Yours faithfully, Peter
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, look, second, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 697.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 144.0 206.0 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84027777778 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71845508901 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.701388888889 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 215.1 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1161361509 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.125 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233369868814 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764303957766 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593737098551 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110327037446 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491167116595 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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