Parents wants to achieve balance between family and career but only q few manage to achieve it what do you think is the lesson ?discuss the solution and provide example
JOne of the most conspicuous trend in the 21st century is the difficulty of keeping a life work.It is undoubtedly the case that who to balance their family which is also affecting the society adversely. In this essay, I am going to examine the possible reasons for this trend and suggest some of the proactive measures that parents could implement to reduce this problem.
The first step is to understand why this happening broadly, speaking there are two main reasons for this. The first and foremost is to cut throat competitive environment due to this cause it is difficult to survive in the surrounding. Parents want to get succed in their life and they want to earn more, and fulfill the needs and deed of their children.Parents are doing a part time jobs which create a work load.A good example is that a person who is doctor or accountant have no time to spent with their family and the bonds between the family member are break down.A part from that one of the causes be multitasking.parents are trying to do their work fast which creates many problems for them.They make promises with their family member but parents unable to complete it. Which cause the harm for the trust of other towards themselves, For example, In France had 35 working hours per week.
There is almost certainly no one solution to this problem given the complexity of its causes .However one option has to be make general public aware of time management. Parents should creates the boundaries between work and the family. Parents should manage the procrasting and learn to say no to others. A good example is that at the weekend the parents move outside with their current and spent more time with them and enjoy the moments.
In conclusion , there are variety of different factor that have led to make this problem Worsley. While it may not be possible to find a complete solution of this . This could probably solved by parents. They should create a schedule of their work and take a proper time to their family and enjoy with them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, while, as to, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73371104816 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54541608135 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521246458924 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 119.51904041 49.4020404114 242% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 119.357142857 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2142857143 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109417425291 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0362316560135 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376053503973 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0690522866688 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289564814633 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.