Being a celebrity such as film star or sports personality brings problem as well as benefit. Do you think that being celebrity bring more benefit or more problems?

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 160, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ve and negative impact. With this essay i will discuss both pros and cons of bein...
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Line 2, column 203, Rule ID: FAMOUS_CELEBRITY[1]
Message: Use simply 'celebrity'.
Suggestion: celebrity
...ill discuss both pros and cons of being famous celebrity. First of all, If you are sports perso...
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Line 3, column 43, Rule ID: FAMOUS_CELEBRITY[1]
Message: Use simply 'celebrity'.
Suggestion: celebrity
...rst of all, If you are sports person or famous celebrity the fame follows you wherever you go. F...
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Line 4, column 55, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Famous
...nd, If I talk about the negative impact.Famous people rarely have there personal like ...
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Line 4, column 152, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...media interference the there life. They dont even get sufficient time to spent with ...
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Line 4, column 254, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...oved ones because of there busy schedule . Sports persons carries the pride of cou...
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Line 4, column 327, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...de of country with them and if they fail at any given point people are always rea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 1615.20841683 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 179.0 315.596192385 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84916201117 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2024116972 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 176.041082164 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620111731844 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8524030735 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158632187069 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709842826431 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779192511717 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982085758962 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675022901743 0.056905535591 119% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 78.4519038076 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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