Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of
violent increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. To what
extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people think that death penalty must require to make our lives secure. Others think that capital punishment is not important to live safely. The issue is a controversial one, but in my opinion a closer examination reveals that it is better to remit the fault and culprit is given a opportunity to live for several reasons. I will explain my position providing examples to support my point of view.
In my opinion, capital punishment is not a good deterrent and somebody who is a judge has no right to take another life. And everybody deserves to live. If he or she kills someone or carries out a strong crime which may be to steal money from bank, to sell a lot of narcotic and so on, this guilty has not be given capital punishment. On the other hand, the same person is earned to society. For this, firstly, prisoner receives education of vocational training and should learn personal skills and specific skills. After life of imprisonment, person can give benefits to people. Clearly, rehabilitation is really better than death penalty.
In contrast, some supporters believe that capital punishment stop people from committing crimes. In their opinions, culprits who are psychopaths, terrorists or any other criminal are given death penalty. By this way, police can control people easily. Furthermore, the amount of imprisonments is avoided. Obviously, the mentioned reasons indicate that capital punishment can decrease the amount of criminals.
In summary, while there are arguments to be made for both sides , it is clear that it is better to prohibit death penalty
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2013-11-24 | Saleh_ADNA | 65 | view |
- In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility.What are your opinions on this? 64
- When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It's pointless to try and keep them alive.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 87
- The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their chil 70
- Improvement in health education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations However the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas 81
- Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves 61
flaws:
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.412 21.0
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.05 0.07
No. of Words: 262 350
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 262 350
No. of Characters: 1278 1500
No. of Different Words: 160 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.023 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.878 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.677 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 98 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 73 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 44 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 26 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.412 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.644 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.529 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.29 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.474 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.05 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5