You are a gift shop keeper.
Write a letter to your supplier, to let him know that you won't need the merchandise you have ordered.
Explain your situation and suggest solution.
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am Peter Smith the stock keeper for Sugar gift shop located in Heliopolis. I am writing to inform you that we will not be able to receive our ordered merchandise for this month.
At the current time, the shop owner had made a decision to stop all requested goods and cease any transaction with our loyal suppliers, as the shop will be under renovation process that might last over two month. As a consequence, there will not be an available space to store new shipments. Moreover, we might face some deficit in our liquidity to meet any new obligations.
As a result of the current situation, I suggest to postpone any deliveries from your kind side, and make a full refund of our ten percent deposit related to the merchandise order. Please note that you will be informed whenever we are ready to commence business.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Peter
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 207, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...vation process that might last over two month. As a consequence, there will not be an...
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Line 7, column 41, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest postponing'.
Suggestion: suggest postponing
...As a result of the current situation, I suggest to postpone any deliveries from your kind side, and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 759.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77358490566 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61269095546 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672955974843 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6980218759 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3333333333 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160562719167 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713254914526 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466048320315 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105737889477 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479747387419 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.