Who is responsible for Climate change, whether Government or industries?
There is an ongoing debate between people about variations in the climate. While it is possible to say that government is responsible for changing in the climate, my understanding is that industries and government both are responsible for this change. My perspective on this topic will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.
There are several reasons why I say government is responsible for variations in the climate. One of them is that they do not impose stringent rules and regulations thereby denizens exploit the environment. They do not plant trees in order to balance the environment. Moreover, they are not punished by the government whenever they create problems for the society. For instance, in India, denizens do not prefer to use public transport instead private vehicles are used by natives. Hence, I believe that government is responsible because strict rules are not imposed on natives and they do not legislate rules and regulations in the favor of environment.
In addition to the above point, Industries are also responsible for the rise in climate change because in the industries chimney are not used by them. Thereby when any product is ignited, dangerous smoke emit in the environment. This is a main reason of increasing temperature in the environment. Moreover, wastage is not disposed properly. They dispose it in the rivers and buried in the ground. It cause water and soil pollution which further is not beneficial for the climate. For example, wood industry always ignites the wastages and disposes its material in the rivers. It has created enormous problems of the creatures.
In the end, it can clearly be said that both government and industries are responsible for the change in the climate. Therefore, both must take strict actions in order to combat with such situations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'industries'' or 'industry's'?
Suggestion: industries'; industry's
...e rise in climate change because in the industries chimney are not used by them. Thereby w...
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Line 5, column 401, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
...the rivers and buried in the ground. It cause water and soil pollution which further ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 10.5418719212 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 295.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18983050847 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92221478853 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501694915254 0.580463131201 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.9 379.143842365 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 4.6157635468 217% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6551724138 150% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.440849009 50.4703680194 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5789473684 104.977214359 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5263157895 20.9669160288 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36842105263 7.25397266985 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 2.91625615764 274% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314552139381 0.242375264174 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855820428549 0.0925447433944 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121680734672 0.071462118173 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195167752445 0.151781067708 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493288270483 0.0609392437508 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 53.1260098522 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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