Age discrimination occurs, when a decision is made on the basis of person’s age. In the workplace these are most often decisions about being employed in the first place. Wining promotions are being unfairly dismissed. Should discrimination against older worker be made illegal?
In the sophisticated world, There is an ongoing debates amoung the people is that the discriminations. It is possible to clim that the crimination is fully depend upon the personal activity and set of age. But antithesis is the statement is stated that the crimination is a not regular activity. I completely agree with this crimination is depends upon the age and opinion that essay will discuss upcoming the points arrive at a plausible conclusion.
Firstly, The criminations is a not good habit in the humans. This is a one kind of disese. This make a man has a one of the criminal. In the earlier age, The childrens are incent and they are not having more knowledge. So in the earlier age is discriminations age. For an example the childrens are make minior issues and problems. With this data it can be conculated by the earlier age is discriminations.
Secondly, The young and elder people are having a more knowledge. They are living different locations such as workplace, bussiness area and more. So they are high pressured mind and lot of tension activity. So this age is criminations age. For an example the most of the crimination are above age is 18 by servay.
furthermore, According to my personal idea i would strongly suggest that the criminations. From an overview at the content ther were a negative impact on the youth and socity after tedious negatiations. It has expected that the people would make cognizance that the fact and support the crimination is depends upon the age.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 10.5418719212 228% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 258.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81782945736 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00523600119 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507751937984 0.580463131201 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 407.7 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6551724138 150% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.5024630542 63% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7671083862 50.4703680194 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.4210526316 104.977214359 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5789473684 20.9669160288 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.25397266985 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 2.91625615764 343% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134910879534 0.242375264174 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467116441327 0.0925447433944 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066437026099 0.071462118173 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0816603737129 0.151781067708 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034645965479 0.0609392437508 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 12.6369458128 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 11.5310837438 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.3980295567 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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