Some people spend a lot of money on tickets to go to sporting and cultural events. Is this a good or bad thing.
It is seen over the past decade that people's lifestyle has changed tremendously. These days, often many people are seen spending moolah on different sport and cultural events and programs across the globe.
Lot many people feel, it is right to spend money on watching live performances and sport matches. However certain group of people feel that spending lavishly on buying tickets can lead to a financial crunch. In my opinion, spending money on watching live events can bring lot many advantages to the society and a nation as a whole, however people must spend wisely on such events.
The primary reason for people spending on live performances and events is the "rise in disposable income". Hence the living standards of people have improved drastically. People now prefer different entertainment sources outside their homes.Purchasing sporting and cultural event tickets has its own set of positives.
Firstly, most youngsters and teenagers tend to follow famous sport and TV/movie stars and consider them as their role models. It gives them a sense of satisfaction and accomplishment when they are praised by friends and family on social media for posting videos and pictures of their favourite stars performing live.
Secondly, many organisation also conduct live shows to promote and raise funds for various social causes as part of their corporate social responsibility. As an illustration, some organisations support the cause of educating the underprivileged, by organising live shows of popular singers. By selling tickets at high price, they cover up the expenses of events and also raise adequate funds.
Lastly, such events increase the tourism by many folds. People travel from different cities and countries to attend various sport event such as FIFA Cup and cricket matches.
On the other hand, always spending money watching such events can ultimately burn a hole in pocket. It can at times lead to financial crisis.In young children, it is often seen that they tend to develop a habit of showing off and consider watching live shows as a status symbol.
In conclusion, spending money on such sporting and cultural events can benefit the society to a greater extent by strengthening the bond between nations, and developing a multicultural environment. However, overspending on such events must be avoided, which can lead to financial problems.
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also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, then, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2019.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35543766578 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89066745226 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533156498674 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 609.3 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8262152837 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.263157895 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8421052632 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05263157895 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228224098632 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768812885968 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712909998388 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104765530323 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803648493398 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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