Your family is going to move to another town. Write a letter to the Principal of a local school asking if they will accept your son.
Respected Sir/Madam,
I intend to write this letter to you to seek your support. We have been shifted to this town recently. Previously we were living at Cheetham Hill town in Manchester and moved to this area due to my husband’s job posting. My son is 12 years of age and he was in standard 7 when we moved. I request you to enroll my son to your school in 7th standard. I understand that is mid-year and admissions are closed, but it would be very kind of you to accommodate. Due to our unplanned and sudden shifting, my son will suffer and his one year will be wasted. I assure you that my son will adjust in class very quickly as he is not only very good in academics but also a school athlete. He used to be a school football captain and would like to continue playing in your school as well. I have heard of your school’s reputation and positive reviews of parents and it would be honor for me if you accommodate my son.
I shall be very grateful to you for this. Looking forward to your positive response.
Yours faithfully,
Samantha
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 21, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Respected Sir/Madam, I intend to write this letter to you to ...
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Line 4, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r positive response. Yours faithfully, Samantha
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 862.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39795918367 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66152496113 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581632653061 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4125682284 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.3076923077 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0769230769 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92307692308 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233180458399 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926806474149 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588226637837 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990686605447 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0937264105162 0.0580467560999 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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