In the modern world, many children spend a lot of time in front of computer, television and art phones this is very harmful to them. To what extent do you agree.
With the rise in modernization, the life style of the people is greatly affected because of various gifts of technology to people like TV, Computer and smart phones. Which have transferred their life tremendously. Nevertheless, there are some issues which remain irrevocable and as complex as ever. The given topic asserts that Do electronic devices are harmful to children?. I 70% agree and 30% disagree with the statement because of its number of ill effects on children. Through this essay, I shall explore the dimensions of topic in upcoming paragraphs.
Beyond doubt, whenever children talk about spending their free time electronic devices like cell phone as well as TV is in the top of priority, but it has created number hazard towards the health of children as number of posture related problems like kyphosis and lyphosis developed due to restriction in mobility of children because of excess use of these devices. Moreover, poor eye site among children is also a gift of these electronic devices. For instance, the recent survey conducted by world health organisation asserts that there was significant rise in number of health related problem among children at very young age because use of these devices.
In addition to this, because of electronic devices, it decline the academic performance of children as children spend number of hours on chatting with their friends on social sites like Instagram and Facebook and keep on procastrinate their work.
However, I would not overlook other side too, to begin with, electronic devices helps to flourish various type of motar skills like hand eye coordination among children at a very young age as no matter either they are playing games on cell phone or changing channels in television they make clicks on screen of various devices while visualising screen so due to this it help to polish motor skill of children.
To conclude, no doubt, electronic devices help to improve the motor skills among children but as we know all glitter is not gold it have various effects on the health as well as academic performance of children.
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| 2018-07-14 | Gagandeep adiwal | 61 | view |
| 2018-07-14 | Nikhil Sharma | 67 | view |
| 2018-07-14 | Nikhil Sharma | 67 | view |
| 2018-07-14 | Nikhil Sharma | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 167, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ple like TV, Computer and smart phones. Which have transferred their life tremendousl...
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Message: Did you mean 'declines'?
Suggestion: declines
...this, because of electronic devices, it decline the academic performance of children as...
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Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
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Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...t as we know all glitter is not gold it have various effects on the health as well a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, no doubt, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1757.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09275362319 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69903792361 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536231884058 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.037883569 49.4020404114 231% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 146.416666667 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.75 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0833333333 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142635326695 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526411756326 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420566928658 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0796746437858 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210681605981 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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