In the modern world, many children spend a lot of time in front of computer, television and art phones this is very harmful to them. To what extent do you agree.
With the rise in modernization, the life style of the people is greatly affected because of various gifts of technology to people like TV, Computer and smart phones, Which have transferred their life tremendously. Nevertheless, there are some issues which remain irrevocable and as complex as ever. The given topic asserts that Do electronic devices are harmful to children?. I 70% agree and 30% disagree with the statement because of its number of ill effects on children. Through this essay, I shall explore the dimensions of topic in upcoming paragraphs.
Beyond doubt, whenever children talk about spending their free time electronic devices like cell phone as well as TV is in the top of priority, but it has created number hazard towards the health of children as number of posture related problems like kyphosis and lyphosis developed due to restriction in mobility of children because of excess use of these devices. Moreover, poor eye site among children is also a gift of these electronic devices. For instance, the recent survey conducted by world health organisation asserts that there was significant rise in number of health related problem among children at very young age because use of these devices.
However, I would not overlook other side too, to begin with, electronic devices helps to flourish various type of motar skills like hand eye coordination among children at a very young age as no matter either they are playing games on cell phone or changing channels in television they make clicks on screen of various devices while visualising screen so due to this it helps to polish motor skill of children.
To conclude, no doubt, electronic devices help to improve the motor skills among children but as we know all glitter is not gold it has various effects on the health as well as academic performance of children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, while, for instance, no doubt, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04901960784 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67704511538 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.535359441 49.4020404114 236% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 154.5 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135995454828 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544526432609 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414098453932 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0778013859867 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227360381083 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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