What is the biggest problem that earth’s residents are facing? Explain both problem and possible solutions.
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in the amount of temperature rise and climate change in a short period of time. There are a wide range of factors that account for why this is happening. In my opinion, this situation can be remedied, provided effective measures are taken.
There are a myriad of reasons for this soaring concern. The most preponderant one is that thanks to industrialisation, many factories, and manufacturing industries are releasing greenhouse gases in the air. Not only industrialisation release toxic gases, but it can also affecting humans health and their well-being. Needless to say, all these demerits have a far-reaching impact on global warming.
Steps to deal with this problem are many, but the most significant ones are not remote or complicated, but accessible and practicable. Primary one stems from the fact that the governments should implement stringent rules and regulations in order to curb the global concern. Besides, international organisations should provide the fund to conduct awareness campaigns to educate the general public. Only when convergent efforts from all sectors are ensured, we can expect to see considerable progress in tackling climate change.
To conclude, dealing with climate change is one of the most prevalent problems that face almost all countries in the world today. Nevertheless, the concrete steps as discussed earlier can effectively strengthen the fight against and alleviate this soaring concern. Its potential impacts are indeed too dire to ignore.
- Some people believe that people who read books can develop more imagination and language skills than those who prefer to watch TV. Do you agree or disagree? 77
- It is said that for some developed countries, tourism may cause some disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this? 85
- Medical technology can increase the humans' life expectancy. Is it blessing or curse? 77
- Some say that music is as important as other subjects in schools to promote learning in children life. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion. 77
- Do you think formal written examinations are a good way to assess knowledge of students? 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 144, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ture rise and climate change in a short period of time. There are a wide range of factors that...
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Line 3, column 13, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
...tive measures are taken. There are a myriad of reasons for this soaring concern. Th...
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Line 3, column 272, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'affect'
Suggestion: affect
...on release toxic gases, but it can also affecting humans health and their well-being. Nee...
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Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
... toxic gases, but it can also affecting humans health and their well-being. Needless t...
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Line 5, column 382, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...duct awareness campaigns to educate the general public. Only when convergent efforts from all ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, nevertheless, so, then, well, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 244.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4631147541 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11976247468 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639344262295 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7270708204 50.4703680194 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2142857143 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4285714286 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 7.25397266985 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0541533707971 0.242375264174 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0168532552579 0.0925447433944 18% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361194360554 0.071462118173 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0337519007195 0.151781067708 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275046401217 0.0609392437508 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.32886699507 122% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 55.0591133005 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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