You are invited to the former classmates’ party organized by one of the classmates. Write a letter to the host about the following:
- Tell that you like to participate in organization of the party
- Share about something relevant that is happening in your life.
- As some information about other friends who will possibly join the party
Dear Dave,
How are you doing? I hope this letter finds you in good health and mental peace. I am really excited about the get-together that you’re planning next month and so grateful for the invitation.
If it is fine, I am interested to get involved in the organization of such events. Not only I have a degree in event management but also successfully orchestrating a family reunion next week, which is solely planned and conducted by me. As both the events are almost same in nature, I think, my experience can really come handy. Besides, I have conducted a thorough research about the catering services and party theme, which can be quite useful at this occasion as well.
Furthermore, could you please tell me who all have been invited so far? Since we are reuniting after a long time, missing out someone will not be justifiable and make few of our friends very upset. I am still in touch with a lot of our classmates and some of them have not received an invite, in case you want me to extend the invitation.
Thanks again and I hope to hear from you soon.
Best Wishes,
Sandip
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 356, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'thorough research'.
Suggestion: thorough research
...y come handy. Besides, I have conducted a thorough research about the catering services and party t...
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Line 7, column 286, Rule ID: AN_INVITE[1]
Message: Use only in informal register. In other registers, 'invitation' should be used.
Suggestion: invitation
...s and some of them have not received an invite, in case you want me to extend the invi...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, really, so, still, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6345177665 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61896468298 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.695431472081 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2913257927 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0833333333 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4166666667 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181485485158 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583141172692 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444905426551 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10220108768 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456653419884 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.