Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to solve the problems in the present and future, it is necessary to understand the past.
In today's hectic city of life, in which life has trials and tribulations vast majorities of people look for a better life by solving different problems and repelling different obstacles. But there are various points of view regarding the modern life. Various points of view which are germane to the matter being discussed brings us to the moot question as to whether people should refer to their past in order to solve any problem in the present and future. However, the popular sentiment to which I vehemently cling is that people have experienced various situations in their personal lives. So, these experiences could form people's future lives and help them not to make an idiotic decision. The underlying aim of this essay is to put forward some cogent reasons to shed light on a number of issues in this framework.
To commence with, people in their personal lives might confront different barriers and they should be able to cope with different critical situations. Generally phrased, human beings experienced various conditions and they should bend over backward to learn many things from these happenings owing to the fact that our past is our best teacher, which helps us not to do something wrong. As a palpable example, vast majorities of individuals who refer to their past for solving their problems became successful when it comes to the decision making. Indeed, they decided what to do based on their experiences in the past. In this case, not only can people make sound decisions and do their task properly and completely but also can make a conspicuous progress in their lives. To elucidate more on this issue, past experiences provide fertile ground for people to evaluate every single facet of a decision and think of the positive and negative consequences of a problem.
Another equally salient point in corroborating my stance on this subject is that people who take their past lives into consideration are organized persons and have less stress. If we take a minute to ponder over it, if people have no plan for their future and make the decision without considering past experiences, they will run into a huge problem and they will be overwhelmed by stress. For instance, last time I applied a method to a university project and the project got perfectly done because the method was classified based on past knowledge. It can be deduced from a combination of breadth of coverage and depth of detail that gets help from past experiences will guarantee our success fighter in present or in the future.
However, every coin has two sides. Sometimes past experiences and knowledge might not work well to solve problems in the present and the future. For example, in the past people had to meet each other in a face to face communication, which was inconvenient for human beings from the different part of the world. But nowadays, with the advent of sophisticated technologies like the internet, the problem has been solved and many people keep in contact from different corners of the globe. However, it was a story in a nutshell; actually, there are more reasonable grounds that can lend weight to my personal perspective.
In light of reasons elaborated, I reiterate that
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'conspicuous progress'.
Suggestion: conspicuous progress
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Message: Use simply 'experiences'.
Suggestion: experiences
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Message: Use simply 'experiences'.
Suggestion: experiences
...and depth of detail that gets help from past experiences will guarantee our success fighter in p...
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Message: Use simply 'experiences'.
Suggestion: experiences
...er, every coin has two sides. Sometimes past experiences and knowledge might not work well to so...
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... of reasons elaborated, I reiterate that
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, look, regarding, so, well, as to, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 95.0 52.1666666667 182% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2669.0 1977.66487455 135% => OK
No of words: 538.0 407.700716846 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96096654275 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81610080973 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69384982541 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 267.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496282527881 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 828.0 618.680645161 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2408568956 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.318181818 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22727272727 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16923944271 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540761785791 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622716315887 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914218777083 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498673085806 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 86.8835125448 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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