It's better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city.
What extent do you agree or disagree.
Today few people think that rural area is better for adolescence to live than urban area. Though other people believe that a metropolitan area has limitless opportunities for young generation and it is certainly excellent for their future. As my point of view, it is irrefutable that big cities are far better for a child's development.
In the beginning, social life could play significant role in the betterment of kids growth. In other words, if a juvenile live in village; he or she may learn morale lessons of life which are inevitable for peaceful society. For instance, recent research by "SAVE THE CHILDREN" group revealed surprising fact that children who raised and grown up in the country side are more sociable and outrage than those who grown up in cities.
However, children have ample benefits to stay in metro city. First and far most pros is superior education which well-known schools provide them in cities. Furthermore, as we all know that education is basic fundamental in one's life. Top level study could assist students to develop their skills, knowledge and their personality. These qualities are significantly useful for youngsters in the later stages of life such as, for better employment.
Furthermore, big cities could provide top standard's amenities to the children such as, primary health centers, various playgrounds and so many resources for entertainment. For example, developed area has different parks to play numerous games like football, tabel tennis, cricket and skating. Apart from it, cities have video game play stations for entertainment.
To conclude, I certainly agree with a group who want to grow their followers in urban area. Cities could furnish uncountable and infinitive scopes for teenagers which will not assist them only in their personal life but also help them in their career as well.
- It's better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city.What extent do you agree or disagree. 84
- Increasing travels between countries enable people to learn different cultures or to increase tension between people from different countries 94
- Increasing travels between countries enable people to learn different cultures or to increase tension between people from different countries 36
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 224, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... that education is basic fundamental in ones life. Top level study could assist stud...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, apart from, for example, for instance, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25503355705 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81291333314 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624161073826 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1324081473 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.875 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219587642588 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065356339511 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528846918596 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114131586608 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443812230102 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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