Some parents send their children to preschool when they are three or four years old. Other parents wait until their children are old enough for primary school before they send them to school.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of sending children to preschool at a young age.
Some parents think that children should be old enough before they are sent to preschool. But other parents believe that their children should be sent to kindergarten when they are three or four years old. Sending children to preschool at a young age is a good idea because they can develop social skills but there are also some negative things when children are taken care without their parents.
When children go to preschool, they can expand their knowledge about the outside world. They will be taught something necessary before they go to primary school. Moreover, teachers will help them to prepare some socials skills such as working in a group, creatively solving the problems or having the critical thinking. Besides that, they can also make new friends and it is a good point because they will know how to make a conversation so confident.
Some parents have to work and they do not have enough time to look after their son so sending children to kindergarten is the best choice. The babysisters help them do it. But when young children are gone to school, in the first day, they will feel uncomfortable and panic because everything around them are so strange. They miss family and really want to be taken care by parents.
So depending on the reasons for sending children to preschool, it can be either positive or negative things. So we need to measure the best solution for children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, look, moreover, really, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1160.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8132780083 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46076633337 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54356846473 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9892402121 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2307692308 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5384615385 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.489181070556 0.244688304435 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179785288109 0.084324248473 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117163443984 0.0667982634062 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2998974181 0.151304729494 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124421156073 0.056905535591 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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