some people born with own creativity whereas, rest of the people believe that it comes from hard work and teaching. Do you agree or disagree?
In today's fast paced life, creativity has become intergal part of everyone's life because of this contemporary world. Some like-minded people foster this thinking is that masses are born with creativity. But, rest of inhibtants believe that people's creativity needs teaching and practice. My viewpoints are in harmony with both sides of this ideology. The following paragraphs tend to highlight some important aspects of this issue.
To commence with, there are a myriad of arguments surrounding my viewpoint but the most important factor needs to be considered is that number of people are born with their own creativity and they do not need any practice. To cite an example, Hans raj hans is a prominent punjabi singer and his son Yuvraj hans is also well- known in punjabi singing industry means that Yuvraj hans got talent from his father and he become a good singer without any practice and training. Hence, number of masses are favor in this topic.
On the flip side of this coin, it is rightly said that everyone requires accurate practice and teachning to perform better in their work and there are various famous singers around the world, who give some time to themselves for doing few exercises like, vocal exercises in order to clean their voice. For instance, Einstein, who gave various sacrifices and did hard work to become a famous scientist.
After analyzing to the given statement, it can be stated that without practice and hard work anyone cannot get lucrative job in their up-coming time because everyone needs to appropriate teaching.
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...everyone needs to appropriate teaching.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 258.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06201550388 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53650707804 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604651162791 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.2046428481 50.4703680194 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.727272727 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4545454545 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.25397266985 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241698054714 0.242375264174 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881941021387 0.0925447433944 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786819317168 0.071462118173 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124573686067 0.151781067708 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495939042269 0.0609392437508 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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