You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend.In your letter:
1- Explain why you are selling the television.
2-Describe the television.
3- Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it
Dear John,
It`s been long since we have last met. I hope you and your family are all well! I`m writing to tell you that I am selling my television currently and wondering if you want to buy.
Recently, there are running sale on the electrical devices in several markets, and many people approach to buy their needs. I visited the nearby electrical shop and got interested from the presented products. When I checked one of the published leaflets, I noticed that there are several television models with a considerable price. Instantly, I booked a new large TV, and it will be delivered within a week to my home.
My current TV condition is still new, and it does not have any operation errors. However, some minor scratches can be visible on the surface due to its first transportation. It has a large screen with 40 inches, and it is also in black color. There is a stand support for the television, but you may use its wall support to be away from children hands.
I know that your work office is two blocks away from my home; therefore, I would suggest that you visit me to check the television condition by yourself, and that you try it for a continues hour while having a dinner.
Warm wishes,
Ayoub
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 202, Rule ID: HAVE_A_BREAKFAST[1]
Message: When we speak of types of meals, the article is not required: 'having dinner'.
Suggestion: having dinner
...t you try it for a continues hour while having a dinner. Warm wishes, Ayoub
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1016.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63926940639 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60185837838 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662100456621 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.463917525773 1293% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6114919601 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6666666667 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227729721352 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598393557795 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101680048885 0.0603063233224 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140440330421 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0965518151478 0.0580467560999 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.