In some countries people are not taking care of their elderly relatives – instead trained professionals are used to care for the elderly. Do you see this as a positive or a negative development?
Nowadays, we live in a modern world which meaning of everything is changed. One of these subjects is position of old people. In the past children felt a big responsibility for take care of their parents, however today this kind of feeling is very rarely. Some people prefer to take a professional help to take care of old people and other people are not very agree with this.
In my opinion, positive aspects is more than negatives one. Firstly, old people like everybody else have needs, however some of these needy are very especial. For example, most of them suffer from blood pressures or ha...
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Nowadays, we live in a modern world which meaning of everything is changed.
Nowadays, we live in a modern world where meaning of everything is changed.
a big responsibility for take care of their parents,
a big responsibility for taking care of their parents,
Sentence: In my opinion, positive aspects is more than negatives one.
Description: The fragment , positive aspects is not usually followed by is
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace is with are
they need help in every field nut modern man have not time for do these duties.
they need help in every field but modern men have not time for these duties.
Sentence: They should avid some foods and materials like sault, sugar, oil, red meat and so on.
Error: sault Suggestion: No alternate word
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