The diagrams below show some principles of house designs for full and for warm climates.
The consider diagram show the information about the some rules of house design for cool and for warm climates. It is very clear and coherent representation.
Firstly, in the winter the material for building is used for heat storage, as well as the insulation used for the heat loss reduction. Therefore, the all house is cover from the insulation. On the other hand, the house internally cover by the thermal. Apart from this, the angle are always set high for that direction, from where the heat come in the house from sun through the window. So, that is the easy way to store the heat in house.
On the second diagram, in this summer there are house set a like way which provide good environment condition in both time; day and night. Firstly, discuss about the day time climate. Therefore, in the day the windows are closed and covered. Apart from that, the roof of house are covered by insulation and it is also in hut shape. Moving ahead, it need external insulation and effective. It also very effective roof material. On the other hand, at the time of night the windows are open for closing the wind. Moving forward, the ventilation used for the removing heat which store at the time of day in the house.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “So , that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'houses'?
Suggestion: houses
...econd diagram, in this summer there are house set a like way which provide good envir...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, second, so, therefore, well, apart from, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1001.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61290322581 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40103222014 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502304147465 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.9 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 3.36585365854 297% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5420838334 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.7333333333 112.824112599 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.4666666667 22.9334400587 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288514418366 0.215688989381 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851036658797 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143217082567 0.0843802449381 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258564412652 0.15604864568 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.172490877327 0.0819641961636 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 13.2329268293 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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