Some people think that certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars.
It has been controversial whether some offenders should be sentenced to do community services rather than being imprisoned. I completely agree with this perspective only if the crimes committed are small ones, and this essay will turn clear my support.
There are significant reasons to allow minor offenders to pay their sentences through a volunteer job. However, these criminals must have been judged and were seen as rarely threatful to society such as traffic offenders, shoplifters, and small robbers. Firstly, the process involving such jobs can role a rehabilitation paper in their lives. This experience in helping others can help them to develop the sense of community and acquire more responsibility. For instance, a traffic infractor could feel more responsible if he fed homeless people. Therefore, this kind of punishment may change their criminal minds and turn them into better humans.
Furthermore, not sending every criminal to the prison result in a relieve in the penitentiary system. Many correctional institutions are overcrowded, resulting in various internal problems to inmates and high expenditures to the government. Moreover, if the misdemeanor gets in contact with felonies, which occurs in prisons, the former probably would not become better individuals after being released, as they living experience in penitentiary may exacerbate their behavior. Consequently, sentencing petty criminals to lenient sentences such as community services, decrease the probability of forming more severe criminals.
In conclusion, although most sentenced offenders should be incarcerated, there are some who deserve a lenient sentence such as community service. I utterly agree with this assert, and I think this is highly productive in the rehabilitation process, and avoid overcrowding the penitentiary system.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 65, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... every criminal to the prison result in a relieve in the penitentiary system. Many correc...
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Line 4, column 180, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'I'?
Suggestion: an; I
...vice. I utterly agree with this assert, an I think this is highly productive in the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, i think, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73161764706 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15114281118 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650735294118 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5985529992 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.357142857 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13338843506 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447351979111 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791885711246 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978634782554 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665938758675 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.95 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.38 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.