A construction company finished renovations at your home recently. You are not happy with their work. Write a letter to complain to the manger about this matter. In your letter explain:
- What type of repairs were done
- What you are not happy about
- What you suggest as a solution.
Begin your letter with:
Dear sir or madam,
Dear sir / Madam,
My name is Harry brown and I am writing with regard to renovation done by your company on 15th may 2018 at 16th street, Melbourne Australia. I am very disappointed by kind of work done by your company as we already decided to put white tiles on wall of bathroom and size of sink.
Let me explain the situation, I was not there at home during renovation because of urgent office work, so we already decided to put white tile on wall of bathroom, but instated of tiles your employee have painted the wall with blue color and now I am facing leakage of water on that wall and the size of sink is also very big as we already decided to put small size near the bathroom now it’s very congested because of that big sink size.
Would you kindly ask your employee to change the sink and put white tiles on wall because now I am facing leakage problem on that wall.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Harry
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir / Madam, My name is Harry brown and I am writing ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... on wall of bathroom and size of sink. Let me explain the situation, I was not ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ngested because of that big sink size. Would you kindly ask your employee to ch...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m facing leakage problem on that wall. Thank you for your consideration. ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Thank you for your consideration. ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Yours faithfully, Harry ...
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Line 11, column 147, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Harry
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, so, kind of, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 782.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46857142857 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35509821521 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542857142857 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 16.3608247423 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 125.643676058 44.8134815571 280% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 130.333333333 76.5299724578 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1666666667 16.8248392259 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 4.34317383033 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149903687226 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105786695172 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403208527968 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0991148771285 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603791850387 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 8.37731958763 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 7.45979381443 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.24 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 8.54432989691 159% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.