There are times when lying is acceptable
Some people believe that there are times when lying is acceptable. However, others disagree with this statement. Personally, I also agree with the statement because there are some environment when times are acceptable. Also human nature and social activities determines the times when lying is acceptable.
First, there is the time when lying is acceptable because of environment condition . For example, when I was child, my country facing social problem , people were protesting the government rules and in that time, there was violence among the persons. The policy and army were searching for the people which were involve in the protesting event. Police asked me to identifying the people. But, I spoke the untruth things that there wasn't any people who are involving in that event. All people thanks me for telling the untruth event and they saved from the government's army. All people accept my untruth opinion in that environment. Thus, the condition determines the time in that the lying is acceptable.
Second, the human nature is also responsible for the time in which lying is acceptable. For example, my father is a social leader. He always talks about the social activities, cooperation and social norms. Most of the time, he involves in social work. However, two years ago, my father faced a problem that he was involving a crime. He drunk local alcohol and involved in a fight. This crime was a great crime for our society because all types of alcohol were banded. But, other social leaders said that it was a mistake but should not be open out in our society. So, all people who were involving in the crime agreed that my father did not involve in the crime. All people accepted the untruth event. My father was a social leader, so there was the time when lying was acceptable. Thus, the nature of the person determines the time when lying is acceptable.
Furthermore, the social culture and activities also determines the time. For example, in our Nepali culture says that our body is nothing but our soul is everything. I should do any work for our soul such that after death, our soul stays in heaven but there is not a heaven. We always do some work for our body. On the other side, we accept the untruth that every work for soul. Thus, there is the time when lying is acceptable due to our culture.
In summation, there are the times when lying is acceptable because there are some environmental condition. Also, human nature and social activities determines the lying is acceptable
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 36.0 15.1003584229 238% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 25.0 11.0286738351 227% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2088.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 429.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86713286713 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52239926431 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.389277389277 0.524837075471 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 666.9 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6003584229 155% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.1465035605 48.9658058833 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.25 100.406767564 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.40625 20.6045352989 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.28125 5.45110844103 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 17.0 3.85842293907 441% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392900719032 0.236089414692 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142996336864 0.076458572812 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.18031045561 0.0737576698707 244% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.309725062081 0.150856017488 205% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126647138349 0.0645574589148 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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