People spend too much on family celebrations such as birthdays and weddings?What are the importance of these celebration?Do you think people really spend too much?
Celebration and Birthday is very important in human life, also it is a memorable and pleasant time for every people. In 21st-century human life is too hectic, people have no time to spend with his family and friends but birthday and weddings give the opportunity to meet each other and enjoy the time. Actually, I do not think people spend too much time and money on birthday and weddings.
Let begin with, Birthdays is the very beautiful day for every people and people enjoy with his colleagues and family members. Due to a celebration of the birthday, people meet with each other, spent time for family members so, people are easily understand to each other. During the birthday people are giving the gift to birthday person so, birthday person feels that peoples are loving to him. A wedding is a memorable day for every couple because at this time two holy hearts are a tie to each other. In weddings people are enjoying the dinner with his best friends also take the photos with the friends.
Furthermore, people are not spending more money on such type of occasion, albeit it depends on the economic condition of the person. For example, some people organize a grand party for birthday and weddings. However, some people organize only ring ceremony for weddings and cake cutting ceremony for birthdays. So, it depends on human disposition. Same as due to a hectic schedule of people. people have less time spent on such occasion, Nevertheless, some people are spent more time because of the intimate relationship.
In conclusion, It is more plausible to say spending time and money is much dependent on the relationship of the people and economic condition on the individual. Finally, in the modern era people are less predilection about such occasion but still, people have love towards his family members and friends so they mostly attend weddings and birthdays and enjoy the time with the friends.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 377, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... so, birthday person feels that peoples are loving to him. A wedding is a memorable day fo...
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Line 5, column 393, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
... as due to a hectic schedule of people. people have less time spent on such occasion, ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91666666667 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55574006312 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.444444444444 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.283729255 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5625 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34311627806 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127386492679 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0991862098082 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236978785174 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0756680236386 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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