The diagrams below show how glass containers, such ad bottles, are produces and recycled.
The supplied pictorials depict the information about the production and recycling of glass by voluminous types of raw material.
The first step of glass production is mixing. In this process all types of raw material properly mix. Following this, melting process is occur. By the help of furnance at high temperature(1500 degree celcius) glass start melting. After that, shaping process is takes place to give shape those glass which are melted before. Finally, after shaping glass containers are prepare.
The second diagram consist glass recycling process. The major step is collection of used glass. Nextly, in second step glass of different colour are sort by sorting process. After this, with the help of washing all impurities are vanish. Then, glass are crush and melt by use of crushing and melting method. Lastly, crushed material is use to make new products.
To conclude, it is evident that in both cases whether it is glass production or it is glass recycling the melting as welll as moulding process is almost similar.
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| 2018-08-29 | Rajan khehra | 56 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'occurred'.
Suggestion: occurred
...mix. Following this, melting process is occur. By the help of furnance at high temper...
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Line 3, column 367, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'prepared'.
Suggestion: prepared
...lly, after shaping glass containers are prepare. The second diagram consist glass re...
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Line 5, column 231, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'vanished'.
Suggestion: vanished
... the help of washing all impurities are vanish. Then, glass are crush and melt by use ...
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Line 5, column 337, Rule ID: BE_USE_TO_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...ing method. Lastly, crushed material is use to make new products. To conclude, i...
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Line 5, column 337, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...ing method. Lastly, crushed material is use to make new products. To conclude, i...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, lastly, second, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14792899408 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56051030417 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573964497041 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4271214582 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.1428571429 112.824112599 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.0714285714 22.9334400587 53% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114988260471 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477964155192 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387328245851 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0745905655348 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182662984757 0.0819641961636 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.7 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 11.4329268293 35% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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