More and more people are moving from rural areas to cities in search of a better life, but city life has its own problems. What are these problems? Suggest some solutions.
In the contemporary society, it is true that innumerable number of people are moving to urban cities for a better lifestyle. However, life in a city is not serene and has its own drawbacks. In this essay, I will analyse some relevant problems and suggest some solution as well.
Life in a city is not economical compared to the rural areas. Firstly, a major worry for an individual moving from rural area to urban city is housing and accommodation as it is highly priced. Secondly, individuals income play a paramount role to have a better lifestyle because nearly everything in the city comes at a cost. Moreover, people migrating from rural areas leads to an increase in the population and traffic. Take Mumbai as an example. If someone wants to drive from western to eastern side of the city, they may spend two or three hours on the road because of traffic congestion. The other major problem is increase in the pollution. It is scientifically proven that, air and water are more cleaner in rural areas in comparison with urban cities.
Accordingly, the solution to the aforementioned issues should also be varied. Firstly, government should have control on the real estate prices and make it affordable for individuals coming in from rural areas. Secondly, Government should set a rule to have a minimum wage structure for every individual. Furthermore, government should make necessary arrangements for public transport to control traffic problems. For example, Dubai government have invested in world class infrastructure for residents and have controlled traffic problems by increasing different modes of transport. Lastly, government should focus on environmental issues like clean air and water. This will help to reduce illness and diseases.
To summarise , several problems are caused by the increasing population in urban areas. I believe that government should take measures including providing affordable housing in cities, improving transport infrastructure and raising public awareness about an eco-friend lifestyle to solve those disturbing issues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 701, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'cleaner' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: cleaner
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Line 7, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, lastly, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36503067485 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98322705955 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561349693252 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.8838501022 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.45 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249451414377 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756580006255 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837869718681 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161074029021 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139332056037 0.056905535591 245% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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