You have recently changed your job and started working for a new company.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter:
explain why you changed your previous job
describe your new job
tell him/her your other news
Dear John,
I hope you have great times; As you knew I had some problems with my job and I finally changed my job.
As I told you before I had many problems with my previous job. I gave a minimum salary per months it isn’t enough for my routine life expenses. That job was a limited work in accounting skills, with some crazy colleague who was really stringy and jealous.
I find a new job in the industrial area. Although it’s far from my home, I earn twice a last job. I have some bonus per month and the factory have a special transport system for employees and labors. their factory has a good environment between colleagues.
Do you finally marriage or not? I happy to tell you Gorges invited me to her wedding ceremony next week, he finally wants to marriage with her girlfriend Sara who was our classmate in university.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Best regards,
Jack
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...my job and I finally changed my job. As I told you before I had many problems w...
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Line 7, column 206, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Their
...nsport system for employees and labors. their factory has a good environment between ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 753.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61963190184 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49945607392 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650306748466 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9131872248 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.75 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5833333333 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41666666667 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145486125982 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529321721802 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039524671237 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0845922589749 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291530013298 0.0580467560999 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.92 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.