childhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries. explain the main causes and effects of this problem, and suggest some solutions.
It is true that obesity in many parts of the world has been getting worse in recent years. There are a variety of possible reasons for this problem, but measures can be definitely taken to deal with this problem.
In my opinion, obesity is the result of many complex factors, such as overeating, poor diet and bad eating habits. For instance, many children really like to eat fast foods and sugary drinks. Another issue which lead to obesity is that unhealthy lifestyles like excessive sleep, lack of exercise and inadequate physical activity because children play computer games and chat on the internet rather than playing outside or doing sport. Another major cause of overweight is that genetic factors which means some children being obesity due to disruption of metabolic or hormonal activities.
All that causes which mentioned above lead to unhealthy and increased the risk of diseases. In other words, more and more people, including young children are seriously overweight. They are at risk of heart diseases and diabetes, which many lead to shorter life spans. Other health problem of obesity are these posture problems, breathing problems, high blood pressure and high cholesterol, so increased diseases put a heavy burden on hospitals in the future.
Some steps should be taken to combat the problems attributed to obesity. Firstly, it is parent’s responsibility to give children healthy food and also choosing healthier cooking method like steaming and boiling in order to ensure that children have a healthy diet. Secondly, the government should band unhealthy junk foods from school menus while recommending eating five portions of fruit and vegetables per day. Finally, children should be encouraged to take regular exercise. For example, schools should allocate more time for sports on school timetables.
In conclusion, childhood obesity has become a major cause of concern in the last few years, so parents and government should focus their attention to solve this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun lead seems to be countable; consider using: 'many leads'.
Suggestion: many leads
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30503144654 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61658841761 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625786163522 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5384792534 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.4375 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5625 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215393318667 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662441903411 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681868933696 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136103121903 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0756295732311 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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