Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages?
In this day and age, with advancement in technology household chore are completed with the help of machines. From my perception, the advantages of this trend outweigh disadvantages. Technology has made humans life more comprehensive from comfort point of view.
Convincing arguments can be made how innovations are making human life simpler. First of all, daily works which used to take considerable time and effort from our everyday are taken care with help of machines as a result, we can use this duration and energy into other productive activities such as reading books or learning new skills. As an example, dish and cloths washing machine, lawn trimmer and many such activities are completed efficiently with the help of technology. Moreover, the quality of work and time consumed is constant every day. Furthermore, convenience that has been introduced to individual's life because of technology cannot be challenged. This are the factors which I believe, are of paramount significance to justify the benefits of technology in our daily life.
Apart from this, the time saved efficiently with the help of machines can used for various other skills to boost career. To illustrate, uplifting of interpersonal skills and soft skills which are integral part of our social life. Admittedly, to an extent our due to ease in our life we tend to loose our routine physical activities which may lead to various health issues. However, this issue can be tackled if an individual engage themselves in physical training or meditation; as a result, health and peace of mind can be achieved in more professional way.
To recapitulate, in spite of the fact that machines may lead to certain issues in our life, the advantages technology offers definitely outbalances its disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 163, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...e considerable time and effort from our everyday are taken care with help of machines as...
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Line 2, column 663, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[3]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...use of technology cannot be challenged. This are the factors which I believe, are of...
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Line 3, column 294, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
... our due to ease in our life we tend to loose our routine physical activities which m...
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Line 4, column 97, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'advantages'' or 'advantage's'?
Suggestion: advantages'; advantage's
...lead to certain issues in our life, the advantages technology offers definitely outbalance...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, apart from, such as, as a result, first of all, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20557491289 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99081785486 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564459930314 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1748753669 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.714285714 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128937408071 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047142689665 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03732522789 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0774836884588 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293189555803 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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