you and your friend recently went on a holiday together you have a problem with your photos taken during the holiday. write a lteer to ask your friend a particular photo and say.
what is the problem with your photograph?
which photo would you like from her?
why do you need this photo?
Dear Ruby,
I hope you are doing well and I am boating from the same boat. I am writing this letter in the connection of a tour which we made in the holidays of December. We clicked a number of pictures but I lost some photographs due to my mobile memory shortage and some new appilications which I recently installed due to some instint tasks.Moreover, you sent me some picture by whats app on day before yesterday,in which I was looking so stunning,I also lost that ones also, hence I want to take again these pictures because a pictiure of me - which was with a statue of Bhagat Singh, was very close t o my heart as well as some were with new friends also which i want to take for keeping memories for future.
Apart from this,I want to frame some image as soon as possible because we recently built a new house and I want to hang out my own picture in my bed room as well as some in driwing room also. I hope you can understand my curiosity as well.
I am looking forward for hearing from your side.
With best regards,
Johan.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ed room as well as some in driwing room also. I hope you can understand my curiosity...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, look, moreover, so, well, apart from, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 850.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31472081218 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47074506277 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583756345178 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 16.3608247423 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 170.466945746 44.8134815571 380% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 121.428571429 76.5299724578 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1428571429 16.8248392259 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 4.34317383033 217% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149116940118 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760307226301 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0285937599049 0.0603063233224 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990643806182 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375935173798 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 8.37731958763 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 70.7449484536 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 7.45979381443 158% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.2 8.54432989691 154% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.