fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have leads on to the idea that thay are also responsible for briging the children up.
There are people who believe that women are solely responsible for deciding regardless of whether have babies leads on to the issue that they are also responsible for growing them up. Beside how we ought to be emphasized between fatherhood and motherhood. This essay will be explicitly analyzed about this problem.
Firstly, nobody does not know that one born baby is the sequence of breeding between one man and one woman. According to the medical term, when a sperm of man has a connection with egg in woman will be create a very first cell of a new baby. As a result, a baby have chracterzses of parent, thus, it is certainly unreasonable women are not solely responsible for determining whether or not to have babies.
More importantly, the responsible for bringing the children up is both from mother and father. For example, fatherless or motherless child will be not becoming a greatest man if they lack of illustration from one of father and mother. A fatherless child always aspirate a family, where there is father and teachs how to be brave and strong in the enormous challengable life. At the same time a motherless child perhaps could not to behaviour softly and have a sensibility inside. Moreover, a fatherhood and motherhood is deserved equal place in the responsibility for bringing a child up and child’s memories.
We made conclude, in spite of one baby has a great co-ordination with a woman from pregnancy period but this is very necessary both of mother and father to growing up a person has benefit for society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng up a person has benefit for society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, thus, for example, as a result, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88257575758 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89109957047 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8999456669 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.416666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340432339005 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126523465749 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124704937472 0.0667982634062 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206181925646 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140225400759 0.056905535591 246% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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