Nowadays horizontal cities and vertical cities better .some discuss topic advantages and disadvantages
One of the most debatable issue today relays to that which buildings are more favourable as horizontal cities and vertical cities it's simple means words of horizontal cities is a tall building of land area and vertical cities is house in live for rural area of inhabitants .in this essay ,I am going to examine this question from both point of view.
On one side of the argument there are people who argue that the benefits of apartment or house considerably outweigh it's disadvantages .the main reason believing this is that horizontal cities means tall building inside there are number of flats with more facilities provide such as-lifting,free car parking security more advance with attached the security cameras and alarms on building corner any nuisance times it's not helpful.for instance nowadays more eminent celebrity like political,filmactor live in flat as well as more encourage to ordinary individual since it's more benefits along with less land consumes .besides,the second plus point is that in this era governments are more fascinating to make tall building for this reason they house to convert shopping mall ,art museums and galleries and so on entertainment sources.
On the other hand it is also possible to make the opposing case.it is often argued that infect of live in vertical cities people have often opinion this in live tall buildings more expensive with who are not very affluent then they not easily afford accommodation rather than vertical cities there are bunch of facilities available 24×7 such as electricity,water and so on.likewise ,house are more safe than flat when the apartment looks like fire with any other trouble so it's residents tremendously nuisance faced out from tall building with more lose life and live in horizontal cities residents overlook more trouble in daily routine life like pollution ,warmth and winter .
On balance,although,flats it's better way more safe land but yet,there are some drawbacks accept residents like air pollution,noise pollution,more expensive and inferior facilities as lifting,security
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, likewise, look, second, so, then, well, for instance, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1748.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34556574924 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07918980822 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538226299694 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 81.0 20.2975951904 399% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 252.701404824 49.4020404114 512% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 437.0 106.682146367 410% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 81.75 20.7667163134 394% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 29.0 7.06120827912 411% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184814048706 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125816830945 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820533422162 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125816830945 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0820533422162 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 44.6 13.0946893788 341% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -19.2 50.2224549098 -38% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 36.1 11.3001002004 319% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.93 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.23 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 34.4 10.1190380762 340% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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