Overpopulation in some of the cities has led to enormous issues. Describe one or two problems which occurred owing to over population how individual and government can tackle with these issues.
Indeed, it is true that in some of the nations the number of denizens has increased upto greater extent. It is also true that cities have flooded with people thereby thousands of problems have arisen. According to me, pollution and the unemployment are the two major problems, and the solutions which must be taken by the government and the individuals will be discussed by me in the upcoming paragraphs.
Pollution is the major problem which is confronted by the people of cities. Owing to over population everyone rides his own car to travel from one place to another. The car emits poison gases in the environment which cause enormous health issues for people. Unemployment is second problem which can be seen in the over populated cities. The increasing rate of less jobs in the cities force people to live without food and basic necessities. This might be one reason in some of the cities so many people spend their nights on the roads.
The pollution problem can easily be solved if government legislate rules in the city, and individual think to travel by public transport. The government must stamped driving license of a one member from the family, and individuals should also obey the rules passed by the government. Moreover, individual should not buy their own cars. The solution of unemployment problem which must be followed by the government is to fix retirement age, and the individual must accept job offer whichever is available. Fixation of retirement age will give chance another young people to do the job, and if individual accept available job, the unemployment will reduce significantly.
Therefore, it can be said that pollution and the less jobs are the two issues which have been aroused owing to rising in number of people in cities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 28, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
Indeed, it is true that in some of the nations the number of denizens has incr...
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Line 1, column 202, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...reby thousands of problems have arisen. According to me, pollution and the unemployment are the...
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Line 3, column 361, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun jobs is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...opulated cities. The increasing rate of less jobs in the cities force people to live...
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Line 3, column 423, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...s force people to live without food and basic necessities. This might be one reason in some of th...
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Line 3, column 470, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ecessities. This might be one reason in some of the cities so many people spend their night...
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Line 7, column 50, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun jobs is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
..., it can be said that pollution and the less jobs are the two issues which have been...
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Line 7, column 112, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: rising
...issues which have been aroused owing to rising in number of people in cities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 5.75862068966 330% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 297.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9696969697 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70005540236 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505050505051 0.580463131201 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 462.6 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.931034482759 537% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6078262845 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53333333333 7.25397266985 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241936335169 0.242375264174 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842521061542 0.0925447433944 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429485961951 0.071462118173 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145981092711 0.151781067708 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413956985928 0.0609392437508 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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