Nowadays in some countries, single young adults prefer to live outside of their parents homes; they usually leave to study or work in different places. Do you think this trend has more advantages or disadvantages?
In the past, children left their parent’s house when they married. However, todays, in some societies we see adult tend to leave their parents as soon as possible. Sometimes, they leave because of her or his education. In my opinion, this matter has both advantages and disadvantages.
Leaving house of parents has many advantages. For the beginning, it is an undoubtedly fact that we have a good, quiet live in their home. When we leave with them, we do not have real responsibilities. It is true; some of us doing some housewife jobs, but none of them are not comparable with real life. Consequ...
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- You have recently used the services of a moving company At the new place you found out that some of your items were badly damaged Write a letter to the company manager including the following Give details of your move List items that were damaged Say what 65
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Sentence: However, todays, in some societies we see adult tend to leave their parents as soon as possible.
Description: The fragment adult tend to is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace tend with verb, past tense
Sentence: For the beginning, it is an undoubtedly fact that we have a good, quiet live in their home.
Description: The fragment an undoubtedly fact is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace undoubtedly with adjective
Therefore, in an in depended life,
Therefore, in an independent life,
in depended life teach us, we necessary have not in the beginning or our life a prefect home, car, jobs.
Description: The fragment life teach us is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace teach with verb, past tense
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to we and necessary
Sentence: This causes we cannot not be well in both job and education.
Description: The fragment be well in is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace well with adjective
flaws:
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.818 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.334 7.5
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Different Words: 149 200
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 304 350
No. of Characters: 1315 1500
No. of Different Words: 149 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.176 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.326 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.497 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 68 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 54 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 36 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 21 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.818 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.334 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.591 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.36 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.544 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.281 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5