An increasing number of people choose to live in big cities.What problems will this bring about? How can the government encourage people to live in small towns?
Unequivocally , nowadays, metropolitan cities are considered as hub of opportunities such as high standard of living, health amenities, better jobs and education options.Therefore, this essay will put forth some obstacles posed by influx of population to cities and suggest some remedies to overcome this concern.
To begin with, overcrowding is the prime problem associated with migration of people to the urban areas as people are moving to cities for greener pastures, education and for basic facilities such as health related which are usually unavailable in suburbs. However, this ever increasing population in cities had contibuted to traffic congestion on roads and pollution which consequently affects the health of inhabitants adversely. According to a recent study, it is seen that , nowadays, people residing in cities are more vulnerable to heart realted diseases and lung problems.
Hopefully, however, myriad of remedies need to be taken into account to engross individuals to stay in remote areas. Politicians need to improve the health related facilities and promote high quality education in these areas to halt the migration of people to city areas.Moreover, opportunities of job had better be provided which is the pivotal reason for this mass shift.
After close analysis of the above statements, it can be concluded that although big cities offer a number of attractions to the people but the problems associated with the migration of people cannot be overlooked, and by providing various basic amenities in rural areas, this trend can be stoppable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, as to, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49382716049 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09100076258 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58024691358 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.5470446059 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 190.714285714 106.682146367 179% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.7142857143 20.7667163134 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1428571429 7.06120827912 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151574128997 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684315671947 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508363596436 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951622419401 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538996867455 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.8 13.0946893788 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 20.05 50.2224549098 40% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.46 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 22.0 9.78957915832 225% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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