Modern lifestyles mean that many parents have little time for their children Many children suffer because they do not get as much attention from their parents as children did in the past

it causes we face with many challenges.
it causes many challenges we face with.

because donot get enough attention from both parents.
Description: The fragment donot get enough is rare

the most improtant disadvantages is
the most improtant disadvantage is

Sentence: They don't have enough time to allocate to their children and this is one contrbuting factor which causes to suffer children.
Error: contrbuting Suggestion: contributing

Sentence: Money is not eveything but life is not imaginable without money in the technology era.
Error: eveything Suggestion: everything

Sentence: If we can not have managible life, children will be suffering.
Error: managible Suggestion: No alternate word

Sentence: It is apparent, the most improtant disadvantages is allocating little time to our children.
Error: improtant Suggestion: important

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Avg. Sentence Length: 13.778 21.0

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Sentences: 27 15
No. of Words: 372 350
No. of Characters: 1744 1500
No. of Different Words: 191 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.392 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.688 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.565 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 111 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 83 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 63 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 43 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.778 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.435 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.37 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.279 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.422 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.119 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5

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