MY LAST SUMMER VACATION IN EUROPE
MY LAST SUMMER VACATION IN EUROPE
All in every one of us, we should have at least a trip to a place where will be stunned and attractive. If it was not good so it is not important because the most interesting thing that we can have the experiences and knowledge about the place we traveled. But sometimes, the unlucky unexpected matter will happen in our trip that we cannot know before. Therefore, we need to find the solutions for the plights in our next trip in the afterward. Such as me when I traveled to five countries in Europe in last summer holidays. This trip included my grand-mom, my uncle, and my mom and cannot be without me.
Until now, I still remember the first day of ten days in the journey involve five countries there are France, Luxembourg, Belgium, Netherlands, and Germany. That was the amazing trip to me but…it was just in my imagination. The first problem happened to me was the time of the flight too long and it was up to 12 hours! That was a thing that was really horrible for me. I went to the plane then I realized the nightmare was coming soon to me and it just not only stop at the flight time but also it was the food and the plane smelling because I have got allergic with that. Although I could not eat anything and I often vomit nearly almost all the time on the plane, it was seriously awful flight than ever! When I heard the notification of the steward that the plane will be landing in a few minutes later and in my heart at that moment was extremely happy. This feeling was like when you escaped the prison then be free and you won’t have to obey and persecute to anyone else or basically, it just tests your endurance. However, after the “maltreat” time I had to be reciprocation that I could observe the sightseeing in France was so stunning and great despite the sight was only in the area of Charles-de-Gaulle airport. In the next few hours later, my family took the luggage and left the airports then moved to the hotel to fresh up, take a nap. In that season through the summer but there was still quite cold.
Almost every hotel under four stars in France usually looks quite “poor”, old and sleazy even they did not have a fridge, some snacks or the instant coffee and the kettle for us. Because of the amount of tourist is really crowded and always abundance especially on the occasions such as the National day of France and the summer holidays of everybody worldwide. The visitors of every each year so much too obviously the hotels in France do not have enough room to rent for tourists to stay. This nation was really famous with its cuisine and Paris was one of the most romantic cities all around the world. However, it extremely illustrious in its sightseeing and historical relics as well. The next day, my family moved to the next place was Luxembourg. This country was extra small and Luxembourg government develops the state completely based on the service sector instead of industry like others countries in Europe. Thus, that is why the amount of tourist comes to Luxembourg really little. The hotels in this country always look luxurious and “high class” to attract the visitors to travel there. Although the population and the area of Luxembourg were lowed but not because that the GDP of this state was either low. I seriously surprised when I have known that Luxembourg’s GDP of each person was on the top (107.206 USD/person/year). When I hung out with my family to have a dinner, I could saw many guys were driving the expensive supercar and you have known that how were they richness? The next location was Belgium, there was the delicious cuisine like a course that I liked and it was the mussel cooked with buttercream. Especially, there was a place that manufactured the best chocolate in the world and my grand-mom bought twenty bars of chocolate to make the gifts for relative people. The following day, my family was present in the Netherlands. Why this country had the name as it so because of the surface of Netherlands always located below the sea level. I had a chance with all family to visit the windmill in there and observed the scene the carpenter created the wooden shoes. Then we went to the place that looks like on TV, this village had a name is Giethoorn and to me, here was the freshest air located in the world. Because of the village’s rule was not let their denizen parking their vehicles in the area of the living place. And the following nation also the last state of my family’s journey, it was Germany. If we talk about this country so we all knew that Germany was the strongest nation in Europe and either the fourth strongest state in the world in the field of industry. Especially here was born many super football players star like and this country had a dish that I really liked is sausage. My mom and my uncle went to shopping here a lot, they bought many kinds of products such as clothes, house applications, boots and headphones in the technology supermarket named Saturn. In Saturn supermarket, I seriously stunned by the hugeness and imposingness of it. To this extent, there was a big location and had “uncountable” brands concentrated in many fields for everyone to come here to be stated with pleasure in their waste money inclination is shopping too much. The fact made me surprised was in Germany, the citizen does not buy the mineral outside in part because of the water in Europe always pure enough to drink immediately whenever you are feeling thirsty. Instead of drinking tonic water, the German will buy the sparkling water and they reckoned that the sparkling water was better than drinking normal water. After ten days traveled in dreamy Europe, my family who also felt a fond remembrance of Viet Nam. But any games in our life always have the end and it was time to say goodbye with the magnificent countries in Europe.
When my family moved to Frankfurt airport to ready to came back home, all of the members in my family were felt regret because the time on a trip was quite short and flew away really fast. However, this trip was have reached the summit of my hope was traveled to Europe and breath the atmosphere in there. I wish I would have more opportunities to visit more nations in the world with family and have more joy with them.
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