Essay topics:
*WHY GO TO UNIVERSITY?
Today, Going to school is the choice that many students almost choose. So, why they do that? . There are many reasons.
First, by going to university, student can follow their favourite subject. I love math very much. Going to University helps me to make friends and solve many beautiful and gorgeous problems in math.
Second, you can have more experiences and horizons. There are many activities you can join at university. For example, they are volunteer, blood donation, helping old people, playing traditional games,.... You can earn a ton of fun
Finally, you can have more and more friends. University is a place with hundred of thousand people from many sections.
To sum up, we should go to university
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| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2018-09-30 | darkerdavid | 40 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 94, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ts almost choose. So, why they do that? . There are many reasons. First, by goin...
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Line 3, column 200, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...ng old people, playing traditional games,.... You can earn a ton of fun Finally, ...
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Line 4, column 73, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...ore friends. University is a place with hundred of thousand people from many sections. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, so, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 43.0788530466 28% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 52.1666666667 27% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 595.0 1977.66487455 30% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 119.0 407.700716846 29% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.30283395202 4.48103885553 74% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6324761263 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 212.727598566 41% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.731092436975 0.524837075471 139% => OK
syllable_count: 181.8 618.680645161 29% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 9.0 20.1344086022 45% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8385088177 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 49.5833333333 100.406767564 49% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 9.91666666667 20.6045352989 48% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254179233753 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867194474816 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101843773729 0.0737576698707 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157451636146 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110126254863 0.0645574589148 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 11.7677419355 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.8 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.24 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 86.8835125448 29% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.002688172 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.6 10.0537634409 56% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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