Some say that the internet is making the world smaller by bringing peopletogether. To what extent do to you agree that the internet is making it easier forpeople to communicate with one another.

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Some say that the internet is making the world smaller by bringing people
together. To what extent do to you agree that the internet is making it easier for
people to communicate with one another.

A global village, that is certainly what the world feels like nowadays. With the help of the
world wide web, you can reach out and get to know people you might never meet in
person. Articles can be coauthored, business deals can be finalized, degrees can be
earned and at times even medical advice can be given?and all of this is just a click away.
Electronic mail, instant messages, web cameras and microphones; all these gadgets and
programs make the presence of the other the person more real. Who knows; with the help
of visual reality you might even get a 3-D image of the speaker! I believe that the internet
is one the best inventions of the last century, you can hardly get to miss anyone and
nobody is really out of reach. You will get to keep the channels patent with your friends,
and will be able to do your work from your bedroom in your pajamas!
However, the internet can also be a major source of harassment. Spammers and hackers
can invade your privacy and get personal/confidential information, which otherwise they
will never get access to. You are never out of anybody’s reach, unless you make a
conscious decision of not checking your email, there can be always more work waiting for
you in your inbox and you might never have a moment for yourself. Worse, if you were a
workaholic, you might never experience that stress-free vacation ever again in your
life?simply, because you have your mobile workplace with you.
As a romantic, I will always look forward to getting an occasional letter in the snail mail. A
personal letter, where I can sense the mood of the writer by the slants in his/her
handwriting and get to know him/her better. But as a type A personality person, the
internet gives me all what I dream of in communication?speed, reliability, and
convenience of time and place. I can certainly tolerate its shortcomings any day, as long
as it keeps me close to my loved ones.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, really, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 1.00243902439 1895% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 5.60731707317 767% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 965.302439024 168% => OK
No of words: 339.0 196.424390244 173% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76991150442 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 3.73543355544 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.808591116 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 106.607317073 180% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566371681416 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 283.868780488 173% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 1.53170731707 653% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.07073170732 560% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1308138002 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.384615385 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0769230769 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07692307692 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 23.0 3.83414634146 600% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151382139917 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572001547943 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478633792637 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0476382013815 0.15604864568 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489624037938 0.0819641961636 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 40.7170731707 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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