the table below presents the number of children ever born to women aged 40-44 years in Australia for each year the information was collected since 1981.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant
The table describes the percentage of women aged 40-44 years that ever born a children in Australia in 1981,1986,1996 and 2006.
The most striking feature is that mostly women aged 40-44 years had two children. It can be seen from the table , in every year the proportion of two children was the highest. Furthermore, before 2006, the trend of the percentage was always the same. Women preferred to had two children than had three children. The two-children families had above 29%, while the other was below that percentage. The lowest percentage for this era was the one-children families. Meanwhi...
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Sentence: Women preferred to had two children than had three children.
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a verb 'to have', past tense
Suggestion: Refer to to and had
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 10
No. of Words: 161 200
No. of Characters: 814 1000
No. of Different Words: 74 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.562 4.0
Average Word Length: 5.056 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.92 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 48 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 42 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 39 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 23 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.1 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.592 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.3 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.513 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.613 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.188 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4