The charts A and B show the share of the UK and Australian cinema market in 2001 and cinema admission in the UK and Australia from 1976 to 2006.
Write a report for a university lecture describing the information shown below.
You should write at least 150 words.
Chart A shows diverse nationalities of movies projected in UK and Australian cinemas in 2001, presents in terms of percentage, and Chart B illustrates record of cinema admissions in these two countries since 1976 to 2005.
According to chart A, Us films accounted most screen proportion in both UK and Australian cinemas, with nearly 80 percent and 70 percent, respectively. For the less of film nationalities, UK cinema screens were dominated second and third most by UK films and Australian films with approximate 25 percent and 10 percent. This situation contrasted obviously with Australian cinemas which shown these two film categories only about 5 and less than 5 percent respectively, but preferred films from other nations with 18 percent, while UK cinemas left screens for this last movie type only less than 5 percent.
Regarding admission record chart, in UK the trend of ticket selling was seem fluctuate but increased in overview, started with 100 million in 1975 before dropped to approximate 60 million in 1985. Thereafter, the trend recovered and rose up considerably and broke through 160 million in 2005. In the same way, amount cinema entering number in Australian rose up more than doubled over the period, started with 30 million in 1975 and finished with 80 million in 2005.
In conclusion, the information record in 2001 shows that Australian cinemas present more diverse movie nationalities, while the admission record presents that going to cinema was preferred more by UK people than Australian people over the period (1975-2005).
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