There is growing tendency that acquiring foreign language has gained increasingly popularity in almost corners of the world, aiming to travelling and opening job opportunities in other regions. However I contend that some other benefits from studying foreign language should be placed more emphasis.
There is growing tendency that acquiring foreign language has gained increasingly popularity in almost corners of the world, aiming to travelling and opening job opportunities in other regions. However I contend that some other benefits from studying foreign language should be placed more emphasis.
On the one hand, it is commonly believed that foreign language acquisition is likely to facilitate learners in many real circumstances. The first prominent reason is that the individuals may satisfy ambition of traveling or exploring new places without the fear of language barrier. In fact, the travellers who excel in english or spanish might go around the world, they are not likely to struggle with differences of indigenous languages. The second thing that is worthing mention is that global citizens are easy to seek occupational chances from overseas countries when they have capacity of language competent. It is not unusual that the workers in disadvantaged countries can move to the western countries to get a job with high salary. These employees need to be equipped certificates of language skills.
One the other hand, Apart from above advantages, learning foreign language assists individuals in terms of expanding knowledge of culture and research. Initially, learners will have insight into culture, history and heritage of host countries. For instance, overseas students become more comprehensive when they comprehend on manners and customs of some countries through reading foreign books or watching overseas shows. Furthermore, foreign language is the effective tool for students can enlarge their know-how and apply this knowledge on study. It is common that in the process of studying, learners need to read foreign references to support for their research.
In conclusion, it seems to me that there are some benefits of foreign language regarding traveling and getting a better occupation. I firmly believe that it is essential to study a overseas language in order to be self- improvement.
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- Some people believe countries have moral obligations to help each other others worry that the aid money cannot get to the poor of this world Discuss both sides and give your own opinion 69
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, may, regarding, second, so, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1705.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46474358974 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9105652581 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567307692308 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1289735562 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.666666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385347405358 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123335591338 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.188745793467 0.0667982634062 283% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.296981857332 0.151304729494 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.304469604303 0.056905535591 535% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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