Some people suggest that it is wrong to give money to beggars asking for money on the street, while others think that it is the right thing to do. Which point of view do you think is correct, and why?
There is always a good in someone. Sometimes one thinks that they are doing good for other but fail to do so, which is probably not their fault intentionally. One of the alturistic thing a person think he is doing but not is giving money to beggers. Sometimes when we stop in our cars or bikes in traffic we see beggers going from car to car knocking the windows to ask for money. Many get obliged and sensitive to their condition and give money to them. In my opinion it is totally wrong.
Many beggers are children under age who begs for money. Their parents choose to not send them to school and beg for a living. They donot get sense of education and hence, cannot think beyond begging. Giving money to them is approving of them to beg. The children are not supervised by their parents about the money collected and can go and use it for various unethical and prohibited activity such as smoking and drinking. Usually there are numerous number of children begging in the same area. If you give money to one of them, most of them will hoard you ask ask you for money often teasing and getting you in danger. One of the exaple ws outside of my college. Once one of my friend gave a few bucks to a child because he claimed to be hungry, eventually all the kids from nearby came and started begging to her oftern pulling her cloths and pushing her. Parents of these children doesnot care of the better future for their children, their ultimate goal is to earn money. They cook new schemes to deceive people, not only the parents do that, they also teach their children these trickry.
Begging has become an industry. There are several rackets that goes on recruiting people to beg for money. They harm people and make them disabled in certain way that they can get sympathy from the prople. Slumdog Millonaire was a movie that enlighted on the ways people operate beggers in India, kidnaping people and handicapping them. They usually set a limit to earn money and if failed to do so molest the people. Giving money to beggers is promoting these industry. In India beggers are lined up near temples asking for money. While visiting a holy place one must think that they should do good for people and hence give money to the beggers. There was an exclusive show on the news channel where they asked a begger that how much they earned per month. Shockingly the answer was more than an average salary of an engineer. People think begging as the easy way to make money.
If one thinks that he/she is obliged to help humanity instead to giving money to beggers one should donate food, clothes, blankets, books etc. One can perform an act of alturism by giving time to those who need it. They shold teach children, make an adult learn something so that they could do a job. If one is begging for money on the streets claiming they are hungry, give them food. Fulfill the basic supply that a person needs.
No one can believe any person the world is filled with cons. Stop giving money thinking it as the act of kindness. Act of kindness comes from developing other's charecter. Making someone realise of their full potential. GIve to the community, not by money but by good deed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 382, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun get seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many gets'.
Suggestion: Many gets
... knocking the windows to ask for money. Many get obliged and sensitive to their conditio...
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Line 3, column 558, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: ask
...ne of them, most of them will hoard you ask ask you for money often teasing and getting...
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Line 5, column 456, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this industry' or 'these industries'?
Suggestion: this industry; these industries
...e. Giving money to beggers is promoting these industry. In India beggers are lined up near tem...
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Line 9, column 187, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'realises'.
Suggestion: realises
...loping others charecter. Making someone realise of their full potential. GIve to the co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, while, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 33.0505617978 197% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2609.0 2235.4752809 117% => OK
No of words: 576.0 442.535393258 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52951388889 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89897948557 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20951158186 2.79657885939 79% => OK
Unique words: 282.0 215.323595506 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489583333333 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 810.9 704.065955056 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 38.0 20.2370786517 188% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3361444631 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.6578947368 118.986275619 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 15.1578947368 23.4991977007 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.44736842105 5.21951772744 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325126053622 0.243740707755 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884616836084 0.0831039109588 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856409937949 0.0758088955206 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205362640218 0.150359130593 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608817339249 0.0667264976115 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 14.1392134831 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 48.8420337079 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 12.1743820225 56% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 12.1639044944 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 100.480337079 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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