Nowadays people get married and have children after the age of 30. Is it a positive or negative development? Give your opinion and examples based on your experience.
An increasing number of people prefer to marry and do family planning at a later age instead of their twenties. According to this trend, there are both positive and negative outcomes for the society which will be discussed in this essay, followed by my own opinion to on this matter to marry in the thirties so that individuals can have strong position financially as well as professionally and emotionally.
On the one hand, the major drawback of getting married at the thirties is that due to professional responsibilities people usually devote lesser time to their family members. They have no time to do joyful activities and spent holidays with their family members because of the workload. For example, I work as a production manager and find it difficult to maintain a balance between social and work life. Moreover, people sometimes also get faced by physical problems with increasing age. Consequently, marrying at a later age makes it hard to start and enjoy family life.
On the other hand, economic stability also played a significant role in making a happy family nowadays. Due to the increasing inflation, it is necessary for a person to have a better work position with a highly paid salary to easily bear the household expenses. This is amply illustrated by the fact that with a good financial condition one can spend on educating children at reputed institutions and afford their demands to provide them a bright future. Therefore, all family members especially children could live a joyful life if there will be no financial issues in the family.
Moreover, as we get older we become more responsible and emotionally attached to our personal relationship. At this stage, we are more mentally stable and calm compared to young people which are essential for building the strong foundation of a relationship with our partner. There are very fewer chances of having disputes and conflicts because both partners understand their responsibilities towards their other half. For instance, a study conducted by the Matrimonial Disputes Tribunal in India stated that people who marry in the late 30s have 76% higher success rate of marriage than the ones who married earlier.
In conclusion, it is an obvious disadvantage of marrying late is to get the time out from work for the family. However, I personally believe that marriage in the late 30s has immense benefits since people can build a great career and result in more successful relationships. It can not only make a family and the society richer but also brings social stability.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2141.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 423.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06146572104 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87234918132 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541371158392 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 690.3 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6300945832 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.944444444 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154513440176 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485154020397 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369332470985 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0904789577479 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379234236774 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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