In some part of the world it is becoming popular to research the history of one's own family. Why might people want to do this? Is it a negative or positive development?
Studying and researching about own family’s history and heritage has become increasingly popular
around the world. There are various reasons to why this would interest an individual and one would
invest time and energy in digging family details, such as, knowledge about ancient customs and
traditions as well as any medical problems. In my opinion, this research is beneficial for the
individual and the future generation.
Knowing and understanding one’s family history and background has always been fascinating for
some. Firstly, it aids in exploring family heritage and culture which have been lost over generation
transition and relocation from native place. This is because, an increased number of people are
moving to different cities and even countries seeking better education and job opportunities. For
this reason, they are not aware of their roots and traditions which one might want to research.
Further, it helps in identifying any genetic diseases which might pass on and be dormant for time
being. Such diseases reappear after long duration and people are left clueless of any preventive
action that could have been taken. This can even prove to be fatal if there is no existing cure
available or due to short span of time doctors are not able to identify the disease timely.
In my opinion, researching about family history can only be considered as advantageous for an
individual and his/her successor. Knowing about family custom, tradition and culture helps in
preventing loss of culture and dialect, as well as aids in future generation be informative of same. An
individual will be benefited by imbibing its rich culture, and on the other hand be prepared for any
unforeseen problems and diseases that might be inherited.
To conclude, study about family has become popular to satiate knowledge about their ancient
culture and traditions, and to have an insight on medical history and issues that can be genetically
transferred.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, well, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1696.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41853035144 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78977957759 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546325878594 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4487404764 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.142857143 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.38176352705 479% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189297233377 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762997406659 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765155455611 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0572425456872 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677921273651 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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