The extended family is less important now that it was in the past.
The term "Family" is the structural unit of the society. The interaction between families represent the society and this pattern of interactive attitude we learn from individual families. So a family and its bonding is a very important fact. In past times, we observed the extended family but nowadays many of us prefer to be in small families. In my point of view, I think being in an extended family is less important than it was in the past. I support this for some specific reasons.
First of all, living in an extended family requires to lead life thinking all of the situations at a time but nowadays we better like to think of ourselves and this is really not possible for a single person to keep in mind all the matters at a time. It sometimes hinders our privacy.
From the early stages of the planet earth to present, there have been a massive change in the way we are joined to each other. Historical studies showed us that at a time people stay in a sect with lot of people. Not in very earlier past, we may have found that our parents also lived in a house with grandparents, cousins, aunts and uncles. And they sometimes feel very nostalgic when they remind of all these. But staying all together urged them to think everything collectively but people nowadays dont like there constraints in life. For example, from my own experiences i feel like that at present living in a single family is a good option. At my home, we stay in an extended family with my aunts. When I go to my house on my weekends i sometimes feel like that I cannot maintain my privacy. When I go there I may love to spend quality times with my parents but as we are family I have to spend with them too. These may be good for after a while but you dont like this always.
Additionally, in the past people use to stay together as most of teh families were agriculture based or they tended to do their job at a common place. But as with time we are now getting educated and for earning our bread and thinking of our career we now like to move at any place for our convenience. So like the previous time this is not important to be in extended family and sometimes this is not possible anymore.
Another important fact of living together in the past was that period the extended family paid a great help to each other in family income, bringing up children etc. But at this present times, people are more financially solvent and there are lots of new amenities available to us to make our life easier. For example, when I was a kid as my mother had to be busy with her job my aunt raised me. There was no baby care centre available at that time. But now the working women are not so tensed about this.
So, although extended families had lots of advantages of living a life with great coopration but with the changing of time, our thinking and sometimes for our need a single family is better and may be easier for us to maintain.
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- TPO-03 - Integrated Writing Task Rembrandt is the most famous of the seventeenth-century Dutch painters. However, there are doubts whether some paintings attributed to Rembrandt were actually painted by him. One such painting is known as attributed to Rem 71
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 53, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'leading'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: leading
..., living in an extended family requires to lead life thinking all of the situations at ...
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Line 2, column 75, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...d family requires to lead life thinking all of the situations at a time but nowadays we be...
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Line 3, column 502, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ything collectively but people nowadays dont like there constraints in life. For exa...
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Line 3, column 576, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e. For example, from my own experiences i feel like that at present living in a s...
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Line 3, column 705, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ay in an extended family with my aunts. When I go to my house on my weekends i somet...
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Line 3, column 961, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e may be good for after a while but you dont like this always. Additionally, in the...
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Line 3, column 976, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...or after a while but you dont like this always. Additionally, in the past people use ...
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Line 4, column 34, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...ways. Additionally, in the past people use to stay together as most of teh familie...
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Line 4, column 350, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the previous time this is not important to be in extended family and sometimes t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f advantages of living a life with great coopration but with the changing of time...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, really, so, while, for example, i feel, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 95.0 52.1666666667 182% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2387.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 544.0 407.700716846 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38786764706 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82947280553 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49271145045 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.435661764706 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 782.1 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6347837376 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4074074074 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1481481481 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25925925926 5.45110844103 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276805285187 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832660140677 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107707427153 0.0737576698707 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174364457949 0.150856017488 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112248430612 0.0645574589148 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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