Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Every news widespread throughout the world within a few seconds in this society with the help of modern technologies. Some people believe that well-informed about that news is crucial. Nonetheless, others think if the news is necessary for you, it is not just a waste of time to knowing about it. From my point of view, in order to maintain their safety and healthy life, people do not pay attention to all events happening around the world.
To begin with, most events are about crimes or people who commit it. I think knowing about those kinds of an event would bring you an anger and stress, not a knowledge or new information. Moreover, spending time for trivial news would probably cause you a loss and it is hard to maintain all those mentally. Scientists proved that the television and other sites that provide with us an information is directly related to the average age of people because most of them give negative vibes to people. From my personal experience, for example, I never watch the news every day like my father because every time after watched the news, he got anxious that causes his stomach illness.
Furthermore, getting information about all the events wastes much time that could spend effectively. Also, young children and adults addicted to electronic devices such as a smartphone, notebook in order to be well-informed about those unnecessary events. I think some of them give children the wrong imitation that leads them to commit a crime or give them an idea of doing it. For example, the comments on the news were awful because most of them appreciate it that one girl kills two innocent children on Monday because she hates school and Monday. I strongly believe that parents should control what their children watch and heard from the social media.
All in all, even though it is nice to be well-informed about everything happens throughout the world, it has many negative impacts on the behavior of people, especially strong for the younger ones. I think the cons of it outweigh the pros.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, nonetheless, second, so, well, for example, i think, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 347.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85590778098 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56720740538 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559077809798 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0234312611 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.3125 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6875 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12763278446 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461250233621 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412477260317 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0873230734344 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438524494347 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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