some people think that news and media are affecting our life in a positive way while others disagree.what is your opinion?give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own experience.
Nowadays, in this competitive and complicated world, the importance of information and news is undeniable for majority of people in all societies. There are considerable debates between social experts about advantages and disadvantages of news and media as people`s requirements.
Some social experts believe that news and media play positive roles in people`s lifestyle undoubtedly. They emphasize that victorious countries use news and information to increase their alacrity to update themselves in last world changes. Recent published reports about distribution of information technologies illustrated that more than 80% of people in U.S. use internet and social media to get information about the world around them. Lots of news websites and agencies have been established during recent years to increase rapidness of news transfer for people and it shows importance of this phenomenon for people and governments. Additionally, amount of people who use media as job advertisement device have been increased recent years. Comprehensive investigations reveal that more than 30% of media users are using it to expand their business in all over the world.
On the other hand, some other social experts think that by distribution of information technologies people`s face to face communication have been decreased sharply during recent years. In their opinion, nowadays, majority of people spend a lot of time on the internet and social media and this tendency can be perilous for families and social relationships. They emphasize that specially children should not use social media a lot. In addition, these experts believe that because of the diversity sources of news, some wrong news from uncertain sources cause to creating unforeseen issues for people.
In conclusion, it is obvious that because several prominent and noticeable reasons, news and media are more available for people. I believe that by utilizing confident and true information we can increase our reaction vigor to adapt with world news and developments. I think news and media are very essential for people to improve their economic and political knowledge in all over the world and these are very affecting our life definitely.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, i think, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1881.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53235294118 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05776423966 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491176470588 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9949837675 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.4 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46666666667 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196140744798 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765120522099 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421845635277 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1362823587 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234519981688 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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