Many people believe that it is very important to make large amounts of money, while others are satisfied to earn a comfortable living.
Surely, everyone needs money for living, but I am deeply convinced that money is not the most important things value in people’s /human’s/ life. Yet, I agree with the statement that person needs to earn as much money as needs to spend for a comfortable living.
I should say so, a large amount of money does not help people become happy or find friends, inasmuch they cannot be sure people who around them is their real friends or they aprisiet appreciatee them because of their merits or because of money. For example, one of my co-workers who rich enough, as she said, she сould not never be can not ever be sure that people who around her his real friends or they just want to be with her because of her money.
Despite what I mentioned above I am sure that huge amounts of money can help people avoid anplusnt unpleasant situations, get good education, succssed in a life and cure diseases desseses, which in the other cases will be fatal. For an obvious example of my friend’s father experience when he cured, thanks to his money.
Last but not least, a huge amount of money can give chance for charity and actions of kindness. In addition, it is a chance to travel to know new people, new places and rule one’s life as he or she wants. For instance, my friend thanks her wealth can saved the lives lifes of many homeless dogs.
To make a long story short I would like to state that money can help people to be successful, healthy but the availability of money cannot make a person happier.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: be never can
...rich enough, as she said, she сould not never be can not ever be sure that people who around...
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...ugh, as she said, she сould not never be can not ever be sure that people who aro...
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Suggestion:
...they just want to be with her because of her money. Despite what I mentioned ab...
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...nstance, my friend thanks her wealth can saved the lives lifes of many homeless d...
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Suggestion:
...of money cannot make a person happier.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1977.66487455 64% => OK
No of words: 274.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61678832117 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47643537463 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558394160584 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 618.680645161 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.3855576843 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.5 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4 20.6045352989 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22524314053 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892295804286 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559895723342 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12476211582 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490342768369 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 58.1214874552 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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