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Bar Chart
The bar chart shows the information about the Internet users in different age groups from 1998 to 2000 in Taiwan.
The Internet users who were between 16 years old to 30 years old had the highest percentage, which was showing a decrease from about 53% to about 44 % in 3 years. The group aged from 31 to 51, ranked second, saw a decline of 5% , from 53% in 2998 to 45% in 1999, and then made up for 37% in 2000.
The percentages in rest groups are similiar, and both of them climed in this selected period. The Internet users under 15 years old rose from 2% to 9 %, while those over 50...
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Sentence: The percentages in rest groups are similiar, and both of them climed in this selected period.
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